So I decided to spend some of my pizza money on a banner ad on CPF. I keep running into situations (GTG's, SHOT Show, emails) that make me realize I've only reached a sliver of the CPF community. Since I'm attempting to do this for a living I really need to get some more lights moving. So, I put my first draft ad below and I'd really like feedback from anyone.
A few rules:
1) I will not do an animated ad
2) I will not have an ad with roll-over functionality
3) I reserve the right to add to this list, subtract, or change my mind entirely
I'm okay with the "general" format, but I'd especially like feedback on the copy for the white text. I have 4 lines and want to use them wisely. What should I say about my lights? What appeals to you that needs to be the first thing you want to/should know about my lights? What makes them (in your eyes) different or "worth it." I'd be extra excited to hear from Alpha owners who could speak to what encouraged them to buy a light from me in the first place and/or what their experience has been so far...regarding how I should advertise my lights. I'm not fishing for compliments, I just want to know what the valid selling points are...from the perspective of my customers...or potential customers
Thanks in advance! CFP rules.